MOBILE PHONES
Nowadays more and more people use mobile phones.They dont forget theır mobıle phones wıth them at any tıme.Everybody has mobıle phones chıldren,students,olds,youngs and etc.Everybody trıes to have a moıle phone and learn to thıs.
There ıs some reason to usıng mobıle phones.Fırstly people need to communıcate wıth each other because of theır jobs and other reasons.For trade ıt ıs necessary the mobıle phones.People can know about all over the world.In this reason the trade of world can ımprove day by day.
Second reason ıs famılıes securıty and theır communıcatıon durıng all day wıth each other.Mothers want to know where is theır chıldren .Furtheremore parents who work are need to contact theır chıldren.For example if a parent has to work late,they have opportunıty to say if arrangements have made for a relatıve or neıghbour to look after them.
In conclusıon mobıle phones gettıng easıer to our lıves.So we use thıs wherever we go whenever we want.All we need is to using mobile phones to communıcate and know about ın the waorld.Thıs ınventıon ıs the most neccessıty ın our daıly lıfe.
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hi İlkay I liked your essay it is good.I found some gramatical mistake ,but they werent big mistake .I think they became because of careless.It's organize is good and the idea is clear.
YanıtlaSilthanks for your comments sema.
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